Feeling The Need. Poem by Fay Slimm

Feeling The Need.

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If we sing with all the voices
..................................... of a mountain,
And we applaud at countless
......................... creatures giving birth,
When the symphony of life
............................ is stifled by disdain
We will feel the need to mourn
.................................... for dying earth.

If we enter into pleasure
............................. with each rainbow,
And we paint our words
......................in colours of right mind,
When the clouds dropp toxic rain
........................ enough to foster woe
We feel like weeping too
......................... at what is left behind.

If we follow all the footprints
............................................ of a river,
And we understand
.................the lovesong of the moon,
When the silent pleas of
............... dying trees set us ashiver,
We will feel the need for work
..................... to stem earth' s doom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 27 November 2009

If we replace the forests and bring water to the deserts if we stop the smoking chimneys of despair if we stop the rape and pillage of the jungles we may create a world for all to share

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David Harris 26 November 2009

Fay, your poetic words flow straight and true to what we are doing to our mother earth. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Carol Gall 25 November 2009

said in words that flow wth beauty and truth 10

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Sandra Martyres 25 November 2009

A very thought provoking piece Fay....crafted in your own unique poetic style..thanks

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