Fear Poem by Ana Z. M.

Fear

Rating: 4.8


Fear loses when I am close to you,
when I forget about what is loneliness,
but lately you are the one I fear,
now the world is my nightmare.

I've lost the one who protected me,
from all the fear which could rule in me,
now I am exposed,
to my nightmare every night, and everyday.

I fear what you've done to me,
I fear that's true,
that it's not just a nightmare,
that's just my reality.

I fear for it to happen again,
I fear the pain that have grown in my heart,
I fear for it to get worst,
I fear for it to take me to an end.

I fear not to have you one more time,
for our dreams to disappear for once and for all,
I fear for what's happening now,
and I fear it's not just a nightmare.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Desiree Burdick 17 January 2009

i have alot of fears to :)

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Kesav Easwaran 18 May 2009

fearing nightmares and realities both...face the realities strongwilled...there won't be any more nightmares... emotional write... it expresses the confused mind very well...10

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 19 April 2009

the flow and sequence is perfect as well as the emotion

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Darkness J 05 February 2009

It is a wonderful poem, I was drowning between the lines really. Keep writing.

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Michael Gale 30 January 2009

Great poem! I do believe that 'lonelyness, ' should be spelled, 'loneliness'. Yes-My spell checker has confirmed it. Always happy to help! God bless us all-MJG.

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J. P. Dullahan 24 January 2009

Your poems are extremely passionate and direct. In spite of the fears and the darkness, they are bursting with life!

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