I'Ll Give Myself For Your Happiness Poem by Ana Z. M.

I'Ll Give Myself For Your Happiness

Rating: 3.4


I can't fight up the tears of your face,
I can't let them grow,
I can't let you down,
I can't fight your pain.

I'll give up forever my love,
I'll give up forever my freedom,
I'll give up forever my life,
I'll give up forever who I am.

Im only looking for your hapiness,
I just want you to know you can be happy,
I'll give up myself for you,
I love you more than I love myself..

I'll finally make you happy...
and lose who I am....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Oliver Coleman 02 June 2009

Letting go is hard, I can see where you are coming from and you have an abundance of feeling, very nice job

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Shashendra Amalshan 01 June 2009

I tell you what Ana poetry is about expressing yourself.....just let the emotions fflow through your pen and a beautiful poem will be made...and you v expressed yourself well here...thanks..yes it is a lovely..cute phrase indeed 10+++ regards shan

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Tiffany Fawcett 31 May 2009

I liked. It wasn't the best but it was a really good idea. Be more descriptive. Mor expressive in choosing your words. Thanks for asking to me comment. PLease do the same for me.

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Meggie Gultiano 31 May 2009

this is so lovely and a cute poem

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Angel Jimenez 22 May 2009

An your poems are very sincere.....you express ALL your feelings in your poems. lovely poems! ! ! 10+

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