Failed Poem by Joanna Pavlides

Failed

Rating: 2.8


I write every word
With hope
That you will read it
One day

It will be my chance
To explain
To show you
How it really felt

To see you radiant
To make you smile
To feel for one second
You were only mine

The rays of your love
That never fade
Your hand in my hand
Your kiss on my hair

The world unaware
Was of it all
The nights brought the passion
The days promptly stole

Without the words
Conversation flowing
But we failed in the end
To keep it going

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2015

To see you radiant To make you smile To feel for one second You were only mine.. But we failed in the end To keep it going..you express the realities of love and life in a simple way in simple language. simplicity is your strength in your poems.

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 August 2015

Heartfelt drop. Simple with a nice flow. Loved it.

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Valerie Dohren 31 July 2012

A poem of simple words but very heartfelt and well penned.

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Kasia Fedyk 10 July 2012

beautiful Joanna, very heart felt and touching. I feel you and your every word. Thank you so much! ! Love, Kasia

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