Fa01 Enemy Within Poem by Manonton Dalan

Fa01 Enemy Within

Rating: 5.0


all of us desire happiness
in every possible degree
to our own selfish craving
which lead to laws to abide
but then we try for loop holes
most of times we get through

fierce battles are fought
in those huge buildings
where computer keys
are press to conquer;
to obliterate take-overs
citizens will pay results

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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