Exciting Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Exciting Love.

Rating: 5.0


Love can be heightened in quite awesome ways.
Boredom's indicted as pleasure finds voice.
Laughter is medicine, smiles can re-phrase
Definition of love as we make choices.

We need lighter approach for thrills. Invite
Me to happiness and I'll come. I intend
Being excited at being in love. Delight
We all crave, which, once found never ends.

Love's pleasuring is what keeps alive
Excitement, and helps hearts to revive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

lovely poem on love as we all know it...

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Fiona Davidson 09 April 2009

Excellent write of the excitement of love Fay....Fi 10++

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Very beautiful indeed. you have have chosen a fantastic aspect of love and the other elements to write this piece

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Catrina Heart 09 April 2009

Love's pleasuring is what keeps alive Excitement, and helps hearts to revive. ---------- Excited as I am with your lovely and sweet little poem..........10

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Tsira Goge 09 April 2009

Fay, Very lovely poems, with graceful hope...10...... Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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