Everyday Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Everyday Love.

Rating: 4.5


Why is everyday love
Such acceptable love?

Cooled from the sizzling
Liquid-hot state.
Now respectable
All familiar love.
Everyday love
With an everyday mate.

Comfortably carnal
Grown with the knowing
Transformed by the loving
Of almost every
Unlovable trait.

Everyday love flies
Above despised fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 12 December 2008

Clean and brisk writing. Romantic love done right unifies and balances our animal and spiritual selves. I would imagine you spend many hours selecting just the right combinations of words to make your poems achieve the fine finish they have.

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sara }i{ 22 November 2008

wow everyday love.....great poem ;)

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Tom Balch 10 September 2008

Everyday love gets an everyday ten, great write Fay regards Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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