hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 25,974 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Except Woes


'Truth may remain same
No one has to be blamed
Even if you ask thousand times
It may remain same sometimes

It is to be borne in mind
No where you can find
Your answers if they lie within you
This is fact and simply true

There can’t be forced love
It is give and take move
No one should be more demanding
In turns it is irritating and offending

You ask once, twice, thrice
It will meet sudden demise
As it lacks strength and courage
And later on becomes unbearable to manage

No one can afford to run away
It is expected to remain near and stay
But unholy alliance doesn’t last
It disintegrates and vanishes very fast

Once feelings are hurt and felt
The fragrance of love is never smelt
It is over the moment it is conveyed
You can later on watch as dismayed

There lies only bitterness and no feeling
It does more and more killing
Friends openly turn foes
We have nothing else except woes

Submitted: Sunday, September 18, 2011
Edited: Monday, September 19, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Except Woes by hasmukh amathalal )

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2011 11:01:00 AM)

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    sky high
    its always give and take when feelings are mutual....but if ur alone pursuing love then ur giving more... mindset not good hasmukh... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/19/2011 11:28:00 PM)

    Swarnapali Li.. Life is to face bravely but not to quit! But there can be woes and happy tints. wonderful evaluation of life. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2011 10:17:00 PM)

    There lies only bitterness and no feeling
    It does more and more killing
    Friends openly turn foes
    We have nothing else except woes (Report) Reply

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