Exception Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Exception

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Children are no exception
They deserve our attention
Even poor thinks of child
With eyes full of hope and mild

Yes till they are out
We continue to think about
Stay in and out from home
And again to welcome

Yet the journey is not over
Parent provide cover
With all possible comfort
And silently resign o report

It is best part of the struggle
That is aimed at to remove possible hurdles
The children come up with hardship
With strong resolve to remain on ship

It is, no doubt, well defined crusade
Where involves only duty and no trade
The goal is set for future
But no one is sure

Life is uncertain
So we maintain
Strict silence and comment nothing
We leave it to almighty for blessings

Wednesday, August 27, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2014

Children are no exception They deserve our attention

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

Most Definitely POET aka Ryahn Gillis9 hours ago Very understandable words Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

sweet Michael Dalley9 hours ago sweet Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

real Ale Kufert9 hours ago good angle for the subject, maybe try a new structure with your rhyme. very good work though.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

Excellent poem Ronell Warren Alman9 hours ago Great poem written here.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2014

Very well written LaShanda Richards9 hours ago The children are our future indeed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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