Captain Cur

Rookie - 415 Points (England)

Epic Of You, Act Iv - Poem by Captain Cur

We rehearsed sporadically together.
We spoke our lines
but there was something more going on,
undercurrents swept us away.
We parted from the script
and started acting like free radicals,
crazy, beyond prediction,
yet contained by necessity.

Still, I can never get enough of you.
Your voice waters the thirsty regions of my heart.
Your eyes lighten my dim view of the world.
Your touch softens and aligns me.
Your heart beats synchronous to mine.
We are lovers at fundamental levels.
A small piece of me dies each time we part.
Yes! I got it bad for you.

I am immense when I am with you.
You fill the vastness of my soul.
I am insignificant when you are gone.
My rhythms are attuned to yours.
Let us ride the waves, waves that have no end.
Let us take advantage of our possibilities.
Let us love vehemently!
Live recklessly!
Let's experience it all!
Let us act together.
I love you!

End of Act IV

Comments about Epic Of You, Act Iv by Captain Cur

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (4/23/2013 6:17:00 AM)

    Yes! I got it bad for you - sounds like a guy in love! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 69,573 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/20/2013 7:22:00 PM)

    small piece dies each time we part.. let us act together/ I love you. supreme love. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013

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