spiritual seeker

Rookie - 194 Points (22-11-55 / Malaysia)

Enriching My Poor Heart - Poem by spiritual seeker

Feeling of hunger,
Suppress the ego in me,
Enrich my poor heart.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It is again the blessed month of Ramadhan...and I am fasting.

Comments about Enriching My Poor Heart by spiritual seeker

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (7/22/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    So true..... hunger, thirst, sufferings all are tests by HIM. We are passed if it makes us humble and forgiving. We fail if we became rude and revengeful. Thanks for sharing a great piece. Happy Ramadan. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (7/14/2013 1:05:00 AM)

    Ah...Great wisdom underneath...Happy fasting, Ramadan Mobarak_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,514 Points Hans Vr (7/12/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    This is a fantastic haiku
    Can I sugget the title to be: Enriching my poor heart
    I give this wonderful short poem a great 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 12, 2013


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