Empower Me. Poem by Fay Slimm

Empower Me.

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Empower me to love life.


Oh please.- - -


Empower me.

Empower me to love life again.

Empower me. - -

Oh please empower me.! !

When of a sudden I wake up to gloom,
Walls shrinking, close in....I'm alone.
Mental alertness retreats...I feel lost.
And dawn becomes dusk all too soon.
Empower me to love life again.

Traces of past float in ghostly parade
As helpless I'm carried away.
Strangley familiar, impellingly strong
These depths dark depression has made.
Empower me to love life again.

Lift me to gentler horizons from where
Nurturing aid cascades light.
Carry and comfort, transport me to peace.
As so often before, I need care.
Empower me to love life again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Timothy Jarrett 09 August 2008

Fay, Beautiful and descritive work of the person who loves life trying to break the awful bonds of depression. I like it because it is so hopeful. It is the plea and the love of life that stands out and not the depression.

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Ernestine Northover 08 August 2008

Very nice piece of writings Fay, one can feel the gloom and despair in this poem which has been very well produced. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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