Emerald Poem by M.J. Lemon

Emerald

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On a day when emerald is ubiquitous
one may dwell on greening
and springtime and renewal and coming of new life
Yes, life
What is life?
Some call it sacred special or a gift
But you can certainly remember that
one person who made
living sound so ordinary that listening to the details
prompted the mind to unravel to travel to wander
to rid the environment of the commonplace
Birth
always first
I remember only the crib and mobile
and the aquarium with the angelfish
and two faces a man and a woman
dad and mom
Then came the fourth birthday
baby teeth out
and the puppy in, the terrier
and my companion always by my side
And because I am of that generation
I still remember the kid
Sonny who caught a virus and then disappeared
We thought it was normal when the teacher told us
he died from the sickness
from disease now readily cured
just by swallowing medication twice
There were days at play and
Sherry and Brian and the Lone Ranger
hoarding toys and going home
and then waking up one morning
And I'm in high school
a rite of passage and
I no longer want to know brother and sister
because I was becoming important
There was track and swimming
and chemistry and physics and algebra
and chemistry again when I fell in love
and kissed and fell in love again
and then all over again I forget the faces
but remember the convertible
and the nights parked at the beach
and the prom and the grad
where life seemed to stop and I thought
I mortgaged my own apartment in Nirvana
But college called and academics and athletics and love
filled every moment (Where did I get all that energy?)
And then everything I knew as love withered when
that Treasure from overseas made an introduction
from that insane instant
we became inseparable and I now knew
love lust and humanity were discrete but best
when bundled tight and held close
And so the family began to arrive
all the greatest of gifts when
in third year I broke my leg too
ironically or provocatively a day after reading
in the student paper
another cheerleader activist broke both legs
falling from a balcony
And a private dream died because
I never played a sport professionally
and walking hurt for over a year
but I saved the casts crutches wheelchair
Graduation with honours came and
then a job another and another
and still another all adding up
what might I call a career at some stage
There was that year I didn't forget to call the brother
and sister and they were fine and so was I
and then I did a double take when I realized I still
had that convertible and could carry my Treasure
to the sand dunes where we reclaimed younger days
A career finally arrived better late than never
but by then I wasn't looking for
any job to give my life purpose
How quickly tempus fugit
My daughter called last month and we talked
for an hour before I invited her for dinner
but she said she couldn't make it
because she just landed her dream job
in Norway and was speaking from Bergen
and was going to tell me before
I bludgeoned her with the meatloaf recipe
My back twinges and hasn't felt quite right
since the leg got broken
but now I'm bothered more by the daily medications
for problems I didn't until recently know existed
and the regular routine doctor visits
but I have my Treasure with me always
and I know I can be a parent again even at my age
to two faces a man and a woman
dad and mom
Even I don't believe it but the convertible
is still here even after so many other cars have
come and gone
And coming going
Like the Mystical Shamrock talk
leads the mind to stray or directly
into those burbling tides where you spend time
with your own angelfish or brother or sister
or own broken leg or Sonny or Brian and Sherry
or Treasure or fantasies of
idyllic summers in Norway
Places where maybe life begins anew
Yes, life
What is life?
Some call it sacred

Emerald
Thursday, March 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,love and life,memories,rebirth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 18 January 2017

M.J., this is Bukowski at his best! Absolutely Brilliant! I loved the whole poem! A Whopping 10!

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Mj Lemon 19 January 2017

Thank you, Richard. I have really been enjoying your work.

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Susan Williams 04 November 2020

I have read this awesome piece of literature before and read it again just now and it keeps on growing bigger and deeper like reading certain literary giants like To Kill A Mockingbird and Insomnia and poetry by e e cummings and Robert Frost.I have faved this poem because I want to read it again and again and learn how writing can be done and should be done.

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Mj Lemon 06 November 2020

I am humbled. Thank you so much, Susan.

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Mj Lemon 14 September 2020

Thanks, Bri! ! I wasn't going to leave a comment, but then I saw you used the word 'mouth' again. So...if someone were to say " That joke killed me, " one would have to conclude a funeral is about to take place?

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2020

Heck, i was NOT going to leave a comment when i saw i'd done so in 2016, but i scanned some of my comments and felt i should mention: I spoke of a puppy having to be very small to fit into a mouth, and you said you hadn't used " mouth" in the poem, BUT i was assuming that, as baby teeth came out of a mouth in the poem and THEN you said: " and the puppy in" , the puppy went into the mouth. bri : 0

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Valsa George 14 June 2019

Indeed a poem that shall ever stay green in memory because of the nostalgia and the longing it has produced and the emphasis on the need for a sense of continuous rejuvenation! We have to stay green and the Nature has to be conserved in its pristine beauty! Green symbolizes life and everything that is healthy. Enjoyed the uninterrupted flow of memories. To be brief, this is a poetic marvel!

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Mj Lemon 16 June 2019

Your words are so much appreciated. Thank you so much, Valsa.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on life, love and memories having stunning expression with its all dimension based on philosophy. The poem is lengthy yet it is meaningful and has great theme. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2017

Thank you so very much, Kumarmani. This version of the poem went through many edits. I wanted to give life to the words in how long it took to hold three deep, deep breaths. I took the three to symbolize beginning, middle and end. Thanks again.

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