Each Day With Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Each Day With



Do not become tool
You shall look fool first
As people shall cut jokes
And offer sarcastic strokes

“To fool around”
Is to move aimlessly on ground
Do nothing and disturb others
Cut sorry figure when find no takers

Think bad
And day shall turn into sadness
It shall make you restless
With gloomy face

Try to turn
Sans concern
Happiest day
With no worrisome way

Each day is important
And significant
In its way
To make us comfortable with stay

Each Day With
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2015

Do not become tool You shall look fool first

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2015

I love this poem of advice. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Apr 3,2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2015

Hasmukh Sir, Thank you for sharing the poem. The advice suggested is helpful and worth taking a note. Somewhere down you have used the word concern, which I think, in the context, means worry. Often I feel that your poems would be much easier to understand with a little bit of re-work on the language part, but then it is the choice of the writer readers should respect. Please keep posting. Regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Apr 03,2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 April 2015

asmukh Mehta welcome....welcome Scott Ransopher likes this. Just now · Unlike · 1 Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2015

xNice 11 hours ago by oh gc | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 April 2015

Victoria Toyin Elegbede Mogaji likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1 today

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