Broken heart emo


Dying So Young


You open your eyes and look at me
I stare back at you helplessly
You look so pale and weak
As you lie on this hospital bed
A huge white bandage covers your tiny little head
You reach for my hand and hold it tight
And all of my strength washes away
As tears fill my eyes
I try to hold them back but it's no use
They fall down my cheek
I know you're dying and there's nothing I can do
You're my best friend, without you there's no reason to go on.
You release my hand and wipe my tears
You smile with your pale white lips
'Don't cry' You say
I hold your hand and
I close my eyes shut for a while.
Then your hands start to lose its grip and my eyes open in fear.
It's time.
You take a deep breath
Your last breath
and your eyes close
I stand there and watch as your body fades
'I'll miss you' I Whisper and pull the sheets over your face.

Submitted: Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, August 10, 2011

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  • Yours Forever X (1/13/2013 7:07:00 AM)

    I'm so sorry for you and the poem is great, it might not rhyme but it was definately a rough time for you. keep writing please your writing is beautiful and i can relate with it. Lucy xx (Report) Reply

  • Arianne Owens (6/18/2012 1:50:00 PM)

    that's so sad: (but very good, I was hanging on to every word and felt everything you were discribing (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (8/22/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    Such a sad story I think we all go thru this but not for so young a person it makes the heart heavy, written as it happened...regards (Report) Reply

  • Aqeb Benazir (8/10/2011 11:32:00 AM)

    This is beautifully written, All i can say is - Elegant...everything has already been told in the story.
    I guarantee with no doubt that this will touch MANY MANY hearts...it always does. (Report) Reply

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