Dying Love Poem by kaily raven

this poem is absolutely amazing

a dark poem! well expressed/ Resuscitate LOVE, LOVE is the Rose of life. cultivate your Love Garden, don`t uproot the FLOWER LOVE read mine: a GLEAM of HOPE. PeaCe

beautiful poem. You should never let another hurt you that deeply tho, remember we choose who we wish to love, and if someone does not return that love then its best to move on and always love yourself first. It is a choice we have, and there are always many people that will love us even when others will not. If you were hurt by him than you will be stronger without him. I do believe true love will never die, however don't hang onto lost love. Treasure your memories and strive to find a greater love than before.

well experssed poem! ! .... with some absoluetly great thoughts..! i really enjoyed reading thisp piece...thanks for sharing and hope to read more soon..^__^ DaNa...

i loved how you described him as you 'knight in shining armor' 'clothed in black'and then when he hurts you, if you wanted to look for him you couldn't because 'it's so black' the flow and the rhythm i loved reading it. A 10+ Lee

A very nice poem that portrays the sharp sting of heartbreak. I enjoyed reading it :) . 9/10 P.S. There are more fish in the sea ;)

Hola Kaily - como estes? Welcome to the lovely POEMHUNTER FAMILY we all love you an want to enjoy your poetry as we hope you will enjoy ours. This is a well structured poem with Rhyme - Rhythm and Structure - three balanced verses. (V 1) Sometimes even 'Knights in shining armour' can destroy our love. In V 2 you reminise about a a loving past and in V 3 you lament the bitter memory of the love you shared 'Leaving you sword in my back' the wound of love is still there. When we are young all our affairs of the heart are very very intense. The last two lines illustrate you dilemma - you can neither FORGET nor FIND! 'Though I'll never forget you - I'll never find you in all this black'. As we get older the black turns to grey turns to white and we find another 'Knight in shining armour' and the endless cycle of love goes on and (in the main) it is very very beautiful and rewarding. For all the right reasons i have awarded you a TEN - well done with your initial poem! Adore en la poesia - JOHN

Nice rhytm.........

very nice creative piece. i really liked the ending. i cant wait 4 you 2 post more.