Once In A Life Time Poem by kaily raven

Once In A Life Time

Rating: 4.3


I have heard people say,
When they are deeply and madly in love,
And they are perfect for each other,
That it only happens once in a lifetime,
And I have always wondered what they meant.

I started to search,
To find my once in a lifetime,
And suffered through agonizing pain,
And heartbreak,
Day by dreadful day,
I started to give up hope.

I had no clue,
That there was someone,
Who was searching as well,
Who was beautiful and loving,
Nice and caring,
I thought I was alone,
Until I met you.

With your beautiful face,
And your heart and soul,
That are purer than solid gold,
When I first laid eyes on you,
I instantly fell in love.

I look back on that day,
And see how far we have come,
Through heartbreak,
We have carried on.

And I want you to know,
On this very special day,
That I love you,
And always will love you,
My passion,
My angel,
And my shortcake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 19 September 2009

hey - whats with the shortcake? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Jean Dament 19 September 2009

A sweet poem expressing the feelings we have when we find that special one in our life, Nicely done. Ravensong

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Adam Pinheiro 19 September 2009

I apsolutely loved this poem :) . The message was great, clearly stated and easy to relate to. I adore the first stanza. And the verse that says 'I started to search, To find my once in a lifetime' made me smile because it reminded me of a young girl searching for her prince charming. a wonderful poem, and one of my new favorites. 10/10.

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Vinod Kumar 15 October 2009

A research Oriented write, thanks for sharing your vision,10

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Black & White Right 22 September 2009

And my shortcake- sweet ending

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DaNa XxX 20 September 2009

i absolutely loved this poem..it have such a great message..and almost everybody can relate to it.. very beautiful love poem...10/10! ! ! ! DaNa

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Leeona (XOXOs) Sugakixs 19 September 2009

it made me remember my 'once in a lifetime' It was beautiful

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Harold K Schreiberg 19 September 2009

Very beautiful love poem, a young woman's awakening... Shortcake ambiguous though...(! ! !)

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