Dre@m Of Love Poem by tanvi damle

Dre@m Of Love

Rating: 3.3


I dreamed a dream of you and me,
you were holding my hand and whispering
I love you always forever,
we shall always be together.
You got down on your knees,
and said I was your dream and destiny.
'Marry me right now' was what you said,
so we planned to marry right there without a best man and a bridesmaid,
You said, 'I love you' and i did too,
and then i was married to you.
With the promise to love each other forever,
and with the promise to always be together.
With the winds playing the music of our hearts,
and the waves singing 'Tho never shall be apart.'
We danced on the beach in the moonlight,
with the stars twinkling ever so bright.
We were lost in the love of each others eyes,
and we found a whole new paradise.
So now I kept the dream in the jar and sealed it tight,
cuz I wanna dream the same dream every night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 17 March 2010

Skillful musical outpouring of sweet emotions. CP

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Joseph Poewhit 18 March 2010

Some dreams come true

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Sebastine Humaemo 18 March 2010

lovely...a innocnt dream.....i admired the last two lines, talkin abt sealin t n a jar....nice thought....let te dream be always thre within u.........good work...

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Josh Schultz 18 March 2010

If only this could happen in real life too me.. I really like the poem...

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Merna Ibrahim 18 March 2010

A wonderful romantic poem! ! And a wonderful dream as well.keep writing....Merna

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this is very touching. i like it.

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Leah Ayliffe 05 April 2010

'With the winds playing the music of our hearts, and the waves singing 'Tho never shall be apart.' We danced on the beach in the moonlight, with the stars twinkling ever so bright. We were lost in the love of each others eyes, and we found a whole new paradise.' Loooved it! ! beautiful write!

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Tom Golding 25 March 2010

A nice write up of a lovely dream which every young woman must have but few achieve.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 March 2010

dream and your love sealed safe...good romantic piece

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 21 March 2010

The love of dream.........a good write..........

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