C@ptured He@rt Poem by tanvi damle

C@ptured He@rt

Rating: 3.8


I still remember a things or a few,
the glow on your face when you said, 'I LOVE YOU.'
Take care of yourself you always used to tell,
that twinkle in your eyes, your smile I remember so well.
I remember it so strong and clear,
you promising to be there with me forever.
I still roam with a gleam in my eyes and a smile on my face,
cuz i manage to see you everywhere, every place.
Forgetting and getting over you,
is one thing i cannot possibly do.
When i close my eyes, you is all i can see,
love is only you and me.
From the first kiss to the very last rose,
I remember the way you tickled my nose.
I never wanted to with you ever fight,
I just wanted to be held in your arms tight.
I always will forever remember,
your love so sweet, so tender.
No matter of how odd it might seem,
I still of you every night dream.
But i know what i would do,
if my dream would come true.
I would dance with you again,
the way we did then.
I still am with a little hope waiting,
cuz I really can't shake of the feeling,
that you never will leave me and go,
you'll come back cuz my heart says so.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zakk Burck 24 April 2009

Aww this poem's amazing :)

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this poem deserves a 10+++

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Chitra - 24 April 2009

a genuine warm write..10 for your poem

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Kesav Easwaran 24 April 2009

'From the first kiss to the very last rose, I remember the way you tickled my nose. I never wanted to with you ever fight, I just wanted to be held in your arms tight! '... sincere love overflows in these lines...excellent monologue on love that pains...good work, Tanvi...10

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a wonderful poem filled by beautiful images and music..enjoyed it

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Libbie Jones 28 April 2009

Here i am thinking about how i feel towards this guy that I've fallen madly for and you basically said it all.. Its funny how little things work out like that..=) I like it alot.. keep up the good work.. You have talent!

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Tom Golding 27 April 2009

Sincere and from the heart.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 27 April 2009

great poem Straight from the heart

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

cuz i manage to see you everywhere, every place................. a true love poem..........

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Noel Horlanda 26 April 2009

In the beginning rough sailing, I mean rhyming seemed rough but in the next lines down to the last it went smoothly and fine...10+

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