M@ke Your $p@rk! ! ! ! Poem by tanvi damle

M@ke Your $p@rk! ! ! !

Rating: 3.7


Don't say you're not important, it simply isn't true,
The fact that you were born, is proof that God has a plan for you.
Live your life not because you need to but because you want to,
For once don't think of others think of you.
Make it work, make it go,
Make it a yes instead of no.
You don't have to listen to what others say,
Live your dreams before they fade away.
For once forget all your worries & pain,
& like a child go and dance in the rain.
Make some music, make some noise,
Make a list of simple joys.
Let your heart free, let it dance & sing,
don't be afraid of anything.
Go & do what your heart says is right,
So that you can sleep without any regrets every night.
Make some cookies, make some tea,
Make a date with destiny.
Don't ever get scared to shine in the dark,
Don't give up untill you've reached your mark.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 23 December 2008

' Make some cookies, make some tea, Make a date with destiny '............. .........these lines were simply superb.........loved t.....sebastine...10+........

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From the beginning to the end I was speechless and the concept was awesome 10+

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<font color =fusha>Amy 23 December 2008

i love the enthusiasm and effort that comes from this poem great write

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 December 2008

What a positive outlook highlighted in this poem! A practical advice towards the road for a successful living indeed.

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Tom Golding 23 December 2008

Well done. A good philosophy for living.

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Peter Strugnell 23 January 2010

another great poem from tanvi, this one makes me feel good!

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Kallie Madison 15 January 2009

its great! ! i love it! its great, thats so true and god put on this earth for a reason and you put that into your poem!

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May Namoc 05 January 2009

ooh, Tanvi. bravo. i loved it, very motivational and oh so flowy. great job.

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Libbie Jones 05 January 2009

Tanvi I absolutely loved it! It was as if you knew what i was going through I wish my words flew across the page like that.. if only, if only Thank you Dear

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Indira Babbellapati 31 December 2008

.......motivating, tanvi!

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