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Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 155 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Don't Forget Your Promise!


It's true that black crows are ugly and their sound isn't good
It's true that black crows are the neighbors of the black woods

In winter they are cold and they cough,
But they are loyal to the barren and cold boughs

Hear ye all and for the God's sake,
What is this empty black lake?

It’s a Godhood when we promise
But beware to no miss,

Beware to not loss,
And beware of the holy fuss

We should be loyal to our own words
It’s the time that we can make a better world

Be powerful to your promises, as warm as sun,
Try hard to make your promise real and done

Promises make the feel of trust
And sometimes they let us down in front of the gust

Promises are the keys to happy emotions,
They will make a big super happy portion

As joyful as the childhood flip-flop
Cheer to people who are loyal to their promises, they are at the top

As joyful as the ending of the childhood homework
Cheer to people who are loyal to their promises as powerful as the corks

Breaking the promises is so awful like a spoiled meat
Act to your promise and don't sit!

Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

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we are responsible for our promises to our friends and family.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Nader Baheri (6/29/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    wonderful written.promises are like a mirrors.whenever they break we may fix them but the cracks are still remained on them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Captain Cur (6/21/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    Very well spoken and truthful write.
    Promises are easy to make, easy to break
    but very difficult to keep. (Report) Reply

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