Distort Poem by ramesh rai

Distort

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Have i ever made such a smile
the spring manifested her colorful ductile
the flower never blossomed futile
to make her fragrance every one juvenile

Have i ever made such a smile
stars twinkled devitalise
moon gave up moonlit night
sun has frozen during day light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

Nice images and distortions. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 10 August 2013

Everything is distorted if we look close enough. A great write.

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Hazel Durham 10 August 2013

You capture the reader with beautiful lines so vividly expressed! Superb write!

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R.j. Wynn 12 August 2013

It's a beautiful thing.

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Shahzia Batool 12 August 2013

a write based on wit...nice read! ! !

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David Wood 12 August 2013

A delightful poem. If we could only smile more at people the world would be a happier place.

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Poetheart Morgan 10 August 2013

Ah! you are on the top of a mountain, plus 1800 meters hight, looking for the stars and blossomed flowers at your feet. Now i understand! ! ! A big smile in my face! ! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem. Have I ever made such a smile., , lovely write and loved reading it too.

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