Jahan zaib

Rookie - 82 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Dilemma - Poem by Jahan zaib

Dilemma
They fight in me my love and your love,
Yours to let you go, Mine to stop you,
What's the most precious? I always thought,
My life? That's the only thing I've got,
If not life then you will be mine,
For I can't have you crossing life's line,
Then what else that will end my hope,
And fasten me to a tree alone with a rope,
There you came with a dreadful wish,
Leaving my pleading hand, my cold flesh,
Requested me to pray for you a loyal mate,
Am I not loyal? I thought alone I sat,
Should I pray for your match? Lose you forever?
Should I pray to have you? Lose you never?


Comments about Dilemma by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (12/15/2012 10:49:00 AM)

    sure you should pray for your friends happiness.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/2/2012 10:06:00 PM)

    dilemma makes up what life needs...is it the hidden message (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/28/2012 8:44:00 AM)

    An advice, don't lose her! ! ! The love is insane, has no way to control it! ! ! Pray, cry, suffer but if not you'll be alone! ! Beautiful! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,252 Points Xelam Kan (10/28/2012 7:27:00 AM)

    the last two lines are amazing..... its like a quarrel b/w hope and despair. and being poet you r at the other end................ to be or not to be? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Amanda Laurent (10/27/2012 3:38:00 PM)

    A dilemma indeed! So hard to wish someone that you love happiness elsewhere, when all you want is their love in return. I like how you pit your love and hers against each other in the beginning of your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (10/27/2012 11:49:00 AM)

    superb.... A real dilemma... Dear, U always play upon ur words like a juggler... Really something that fastens the readers to read till end... The flow is nice... A touching line,
    Requested me to pray for you a loyal mate.
    Really daring... Another chissled piece of poetry from U (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 27, 2012



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