Deep... Dark Secret Poem by Lyn Paul

Deep... Dark Secret

Rating: 5.0


She told me once
Her deep dark secret
I will take it to my grave

To be told
Was an honour
A dramatic scene
Replayed

Taken back
To the moment
Eyes filled with sadness
Feeling pure emotion in her voice
Anger in each breath
Yet feeling
A weight beared
When this deep... dark secret
Was shared

This secret locked
For many years

Were mine...
The only ears?

So proud
To have been told
This bond shared
Till I am old
To my death
It shall never... unfold

May your words
Lighten your pain
This secret lost
In the pouring rain




Copyright Reserved May 2014
Lyn Paul

Deep... Dark Secret
Thursday, May 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: honesty,pain,secret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 May 2014

good writing, I like it, thanks.

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Tadasha Tripathy 22 May 2014

Tears are the most efficient cleanser to clean our heart what i feel. Well written and touching the deep of my heart.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 23 May 2014

the onus of being the only sharer...excellent write Lyn.

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Valerie Dohren 23 May 2014

Secrets should always be respected and kept, as long as their content is not likely to harm others. Well expressed.

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Wonderful words that forges a feature of a fantastic friend. Well done my friend.

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

This person found the right person to unload such heaviness.

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Mark Dillon 17 July 2014

A lovely poem, a special moment shared, thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

Very captivating poem..This shows the qualities of a true friend, who is good at heart to keep the secret sincerely and to lighten the pain of a friend as well. Loved the way you presented it.

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Valsa George 15 June 2014

A secret shared with one single soul and never divulged to anyone else will remain a secret for ever, at the same time it will relieve the burden of the one who has been carrying it! If someone, trusting us shares a secret, we are bound to keep it with ourselves. It is a rare quality. A great poem too!

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Captain Cur 31 May 2014

The secret of a secret shared but not revealed, unburdening both your cares, strong write.

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