Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,860 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Cry For The World - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In a world
that's lost it's soul
in a world
that's breaking down

Cry for the answers
that are not lies
cry for the freedom
of our lives

Cry not for us
but for the world


Comments about Cry For The World by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (9/25/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    the world needs to be cried for. good write (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Alookh (matin) (9/14/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    mmmmmm......u are right! ! ! ! .....poor the world! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,727 Points Lorraine Colon (8/22/2013 5:19:00 PM)

    The evil-doers are not crying. They are taking action - so must we. Crying comes naturally when we see the state the world is in, but it accomplishes nothing - just makes us feel better for awhile. But nothing changes. Oh, you got me going here, Dave. See how powerful your words are! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 664 Points David Lessard (8/22/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    yes, cry and pray for it. nice lines. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,691 Points Valerie Dohren (8/22/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    The world is certainly an issue over which to cry! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard York (8/22/2013 6:26:00 AM)

    WoW! ! Moving. Like it very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,023 Points Hazel Durham (8/21/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    Cry for the world with all it's pain and suffering and no answers!
    Powerful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,710 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/21/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    We all cry for the world with no answers in sight. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (8/21/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Cry for the voiceless too. A lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/20/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    if only our tears can cleanse the earth! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/19/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    Cry not for us but for the world..Beautiful poem..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/19/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    there needs to be a lot of crying for the answers. No one seems to worry about it. good poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 19, 2013


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