Clinging To Life: N O T! ! ! ....[ Bri's Life And Death; Inspired By Valsa George's Comment On My ' Slow Down; Get Ready; Go! ' Poem ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Clinging To Life: N O T! ! ! ....[ Bri's Life And Death; Inspired By Valsa George's Comment On My ' Slow Down; Get Ready; Go! ' Poem ]

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I'll may cling to a Nepal Yam vine,
or a big bottle of cheap Indian wine,
but NEVER, to life, shall I, Bri, cling;
not for you, nor YOU, nor for tons of bling!

(January....30.....2018)

Tuesday, January 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,plants,truth,wine
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
see poem and its title.:)bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 February 2018

I know you are not interested in bling, but in things that titillate your palate! If you are offered an ice cream treat of delectable flavors, you will never think of loosening your grip that fastens you to life! I seriously object to your usage - 'a big bottle of cheap Indian wine'!

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Loke Kok Yee 03 February 2018

There is no need to get all worked up Bri You won't have a choice when your time is nigh Others will decide if to life you cling While you can; just go on and have a fling Thanks Bri

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James McLain 30 January 2018

Bling has a way of putting a sparkle in one's eye.. James McLain

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