Clean Poem by dani fries

Clean

Rating: 5.0


we say it almost everyday
when we get out of a shower,
or wash our hands

but do we say it about or mouths
so many words
so many sayings
we dont evean think anymore

our mouths need to be clean
washed out with the filth we
brought in
and cleansed with the songs of
joy

then we can bejoyes
cause we have done well
our lord is proud and now
he is calling us home
as we sing his songs of
joy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

yeah! this was a nice poem young one...

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Romeo Della Valle 09 August 2009

You got your message across clearly, nice wording, keep it up...

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Indira Renganathan 06 August 2009

Only right thought results in right deed...you have aptly versified to have a clean mouth of right thoughts...great

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

clean your soul, clean your words...rightly said..good

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