A Fathers Love Poem by dani fries

A Fathers Love

Rating: 4.5


a dougter so young
just aventuring and wondering
but a fathers love
so protective and controling

yea the two clash
but never end
the father just holds tight
and knows his love will never end

the doughter crying and screaming
saying lifes no fair
father just holds tight
says he knows his love will never end

doughter all grown
and finally moving on
father still holds tight
says his love will never end

i never new
but now i see
he never let go
his love never failed

evan now as he is gone
i still feel it
and its whats keeping me
strong!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A Lifetime Of Fame 28 December 2011

I like that a lot. It's so personal, like you trust the world with your heart. very beautiful

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Sans Serif 02 September 2009

*sniff* This poem actually makes me wish to rekindle the bond me and my dad had.

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dr veenaa rai 06 August 2009

you touched my heart dear..father's love is so unique, so special, so protective...am glad you ve experienced such love in ample..it will take you long...excellent expressions! 10+

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Shekhar Joshi 07 July 2009

nice one.......father's love is indeed strong............ beautiful work........ ;) you need to check the spellings again..........lots of typos in here...

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