Dubble F Poem by dani fries

Dubble F

Rating: 4.0


you mess with me
u mess with them
you mees with them
you mess with me
my family is my sould
and my friends are my llife
so when you desidde to come arouund
get ready to the ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 27 September 2009

Check for typos girl........

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Sans Serif 02 September 2009

Very thoughtful, family and friends should be your soul. great poem.

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Shekhar Joshi 19 June 2009

my family is my soul and my friends are my life..........nice work..........it hurts when some1 tries to mess with your loved ones............good one...... ;)

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