Are You Here Or There Poem by dani fries

Are You Here Or There



your family is gone
you are to fight alone,
no matter were you go
you here the fight, the roar

the cry of the deaths youhave saw
the question is
are you here to fight
the deaths and die

no answer is heard
so you answere ande to say
let me be not hear
but there whith they.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 28 December 2011

Decent read, I enjoyed it. You might want to separate (youhave) to You have. otherwise, perfect poem.

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Scotty Dogg 28 December 2011

I believe (truthfully) that you should take a course on basic grammer and spelling. These two are the foundation for good writing. Good luck!

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