Doug Blair

Rookie - 134 Points (April 6,1951 / London, Ontario, Canada)

Church Mouse - Poem by Doug Blair

Call me a church mouse

Yep, generations of ‘em

Here, under the oaken arches

And that golden and blue glass.

Long quiet pause

Day after day

We like that

Place all to ourselves

Except for one singing woman

With a mop

And a quiet man in black

Sits on a bench with open book

Drops to his knees often

Down where we are.

Couple a’ times he near

Squashed me

But he didn’t know.

Seems gentle and trustworthy

Others before him

Mostly the same, my folks tell me.

…No, I take that back!

Couple of them struck real fear

Into some of the women and kids.

Those few with the nasty smirk

Never looked at the picture windows

Never sat in the bench

To get real quiet.

Sometimes I climbed

All the way up to that

One picture with those fluffy critters

And the kindly man with the staff

(Bearing subscription Ezekiel 34) .

Did it twice when

The place was crowded.

Loud sounds, blended voices

Clapping hands, fun apparently.

Then all got real quiet

And the man with the black coat

Spoke, spoke long

And hard, and raised up that Book.

My siblings were busy out back

Sampling the cakes and fruit.

But I had the better portion

In this lovely quiet and focus

And that Book seemed to be

So very important.

He even pointed up

To the glass picture behind me

Thought I might get noticed.

Crouched down real low.

Nice people, mostly.

Somewhat confused.

They might come more often

If you ask me.


Comments about Church Mouse by Doug Blair

  • Freshman - 640 Points Ruth Walters (1/25/2014 2:42:00 PM)

    I like the way you 'squeak' heh heh (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 134 Points Doug Blair (1/25/2014 2:11:00 PM)

    Little eyes observing what goes on in the House of God. And the impact of such activity. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 25, 2014



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