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(12-12-1982 / Visakhapatnam)

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Carpet Of Light

A carpet of light blinking at random,
Spreads silently in freedom;
The darkness around deepened the glow,
Unfettered it continued to flow,
Over the hedges and the fences.

The carpet seamlessly expanded,
With drops of light assembling;
A bead from east, a bead from west,
All trying to bond with the best!

That fluorescent organic glitter,
Made my heart flutter,
Promising a life better!

Submitted: Tuesday, November 03, 2009
Edited: Monday, July 11, 2011


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  • Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail (1/13/2010 5:49:00 AM)

    loved it, simply loved your capturing of sunlight/darkness, the spreading glow that warns the soul, light enveloping the soul! ! ! Lovely...keep writing...Ruth: -)

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  • Diane Violet (11/25/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    Extraordinary is this carpet of light...revelation, AHA moment...you've captured it well!

  • Rani Turton (11/14/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    Light and darkness, two extremes that fascinate. Light often brings security but darkness can bring peace. I can see that your work does reflect this fascination.

  • Brishti Mazumdar (11/9/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    The darkness around deepened the glow, ...

    ...liked your writing....your thought process.....

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (11/9/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    a fantastic piece of work.

  • Anjali Sinha (11/9/2009 12:15:00 AM)

    now what is this carpet of light
    is it knowledge
    is it faith in god
    is it love?
    whatever, it was always there
    one has to only introspect to be lead towards it

    a powerful poem seeking introspection
    -10 anjali

  • Nivrutti Avhad (11/8/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    a very beautiful poem with nice imagination

  • Mamta Agarwal (11/8/2009 10:33:00 AM)

    i can see here you are in a meditative state to percieve this carpet of light, beautiful imagery interwoven skillfully.

    thanks Ranjit

    Mamta

  • Vijay Menon (11/7/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    a poem truly written by an engineer fine write

  • Priyanka Bhowmick (11/6/2009 11:20:00 PM)

    dats a divine light which brings joy n happiness in the minds if ppl...
    very well scripted words... fine wrtten.. thanx

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