Caring Beauty Poem by Manonton Dalan

Caring Beauty



I was sitting on a hill
when puppy came licking
my hands, I was thrilled
I look and nobody around
I pet her head, so pretty
kiss my hand, made sound
and walk towards ocean

I laid back to watch sky
I see your face with smile
I raise my hand; I see you
said goodbye; I fall asleep
to be awaken by a raindrops
I could run but I didn't do
am wet remembering just you

Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 18 November 2015

I could run but I didn't do am wet remembering just you beautiful ending, thanks for sharing

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Liza Sudina 18 November 2015

am wet remembering just you - hope it sould not be in vain! lovely poem about careful dog, rain and tender memories!

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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