Can It Be? Poem by Kim Barney

Never written a poem with orange rhyme but I guess if I try it may come in time! Who knows?

Then you get disoranged! Ha Ha Ha! Short and sweet poem. Loved your notes about the poem! Just keep writing, I do! Thank you for sharing and also for commenting on my poem. RoseAnn

yes! the orange problem. it has plagued poets through the ages! ! ! then you may just have to rearrange the words to put orange somewhere else! ! i usually keep mine in the refrigerator. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The first poem caused me to loudly snort. [How, to your friend, did you, Senor, retort? ] =============================== I empathize with your “long poem” prob- lem. I try to keep my poems short ……, to control them, BUT they grow, they grow out of control, you know! I just can’t not write long poems; I can’t stop …. the flow! ! One rhyme does lead to yet another: a rhyme-brother. Or a rhyme-sister in certain rhyming cases, [of course]. If it calls for “female”, I’ll not “male” on my … poem force! Kim, your poems MAY be better! but this is not a competition, is it? heh heh :) bri