Im homeless
As wonderer as dandelion
Lead me, butterfly!
Over the rainbow gate
Where my lover lives
Among roses
Waiting for me
Butterfly... 'sigh' one of the most colorful and the most beautiful creature God ever created. Is a very colorful poem, so vivid, another jewel from your writings. Well done
The final five lines stand by themselves and are the making of this lovely poem. I enjoyed it and was invigorated by it.
as the butterfly tilts heavenward, it kicks dust up recalling the lost legend
I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson
What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart... Karin Anderson
Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Such a Nice imagery Thx for sharing ^_^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is filled with beautiful, colorful images, giving the message to the reader that our souls roam freely in search of the 'significant other' who can add color (life) to our world. Well done! Beth