Bond Of Trust Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Bond Of Trust

Rating: 4.8


An incredible force linking atoms
We want to bond with the source

Strong beliefs form a powerful tie
Our hesitations untie the course

(2008/5/4)







COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 04 May 2009

Do we really want or do we only wish that? Otherwise, a thoughtful poem :) 10!

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Thad Wilk 04 May 2009

Solid penning! ! A thought provoking poetic pictorial... A pleasure to read, indeed.. Best regards, *10*! Friend Thad

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a very meaningful and wonderful writting..10+++

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Tsira Goge 05 May 2009

The atom too is the divine mystery... You do not wish, this was released nuclear forces... The atom is invisible--but will split atom...-there will be a horror...must God forbid that.. 10... Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 01 June 2009

This one showcases your strong character. Excellent write.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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I read this as a great Prophet's powerful words. Thank you! 10 Karin Anderson

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Naidz Ladia 12 May 2009

the presentation of these 4 lines are very powerful..''bonding ''in any aspects make a thing tough, strong and powerful....BOND OF TRUST, no other words powerful than this..naizz

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Muhammad Ali 11 May 2009

Beautiful and different way to say a general truth.... lovely piece of Art dear! ! 10..

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tara star 10 May 2009

wht a small but of meaningful lines.....ya its belief and faith tht life requires...but our mind are mostly stucked to do or not to do...thses state of confusion can only be eradicated when our belief conquer them....good write..

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