Burning Need - (Sonnet) Poem by Valerie Dohren

Burning Need - (Sonnet)

Rating: 5.0


In reverie, I dream that I may write
A poem for tomorrow ‘fore tonight,
But still the words elude my empty mind –
I search and search, but such I cannot find.

If inspiration yet should come my way
Perhaps then I shall write a verse today
Which maybe, come tomorrow, you shall read,
So then to satisfy my burning need.

But if perchance a verse remains unwrit’,
Then I shall search my archives bit by bit
To try and seek a poem hidden low,
A rhyme I wrote a long, long time ago.

Alas, such poem yet I can’t locate -
Therefore my burning need remains unsate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

a good poem about writing a poem. many times the words just won't come.

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Lucifera Santez 20 July 2013

such irrevocable longing....................

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Indranil Bhaduri 20 July 2013

Lovely penning of a desie to write.... Great job

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Dee Corpolongo 20 July 2013

Beautiful sonnet, Val. Basically, about nothing! Not really, but said so perfectly. Great write!

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Dave Walker 18 July 2013

A great poem, I know what you mean, sometimes you just can't get nothing out.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful sonnet..I love reading sonnet, but I don't know to write.... Yes, its the burning need to write, Keeps our head spinning to the height. And a lovely poem is on our way to write. Loved reading it.

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Joseph Anderson 25 July 2013

Your muse is only napping, but even then you got a fine poem. I can't find that word-unsate Still worth a 10

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Patricia Grantham 24 July 2013

I agree wholeheartedly with this one. There are times I must say that we may become at a lost for words when it comes to writing poetry. When that happens we must regroup. The majority of the times for me I have to be inspired to write. There maybe thousands of subject to write from the question is are they all suitable subjects for the Poet. There will always be a burning need. That is a good thing. A great write.

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Rupesh R.k Babu 23 July 2013

keep rocking.........

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R.j. Wynn 21 July 2013

That sums up my own experience.

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