Blooming Beauty Poem by Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Blooming Beauty

Rating: 4.8


Love is what we sacrifice
By being good and being nice
It is not barter or bargain
It is grace in shimmering rain
It is what makes us go high
It is a point to touch of sky
Oh my beloved I admit
I am in love let me submit
Please embrace me with love
Like an innocent beautiful dove
I can't praise your charm
By worshiping you with norm
But still i may maintain
You are beauty blooming in rain
Where ever I am you are with me
This is what your love could be

Copyright 2014 Golden Glow

Friday, November 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alesia Leach 17 November 2014

A lovely poem, wonderfully penned with great flow and rhyme.

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Yasmin Khan 20 December 2014

The poem defines love beautifully. It's grace and not a barter or bargain.

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A compelling and creative composition my friend!

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Savita Tyagi 09 November 2014

Lovely poem. Love is beauty blooming in rain! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for visiting my page and for your kind comment.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 November 2014

Another name of love is sacrifice..today Saty Mew Jayte a TV serial hosted by Amir Khan one social Activist Purnima told Power does not bring love but love gives us power..very nice poem :)

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Marvin King Reeds 29 January 2022

This is the new piece of the puzzle of the never ending analysis of the word love, and I loved every inch and flow of the poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2021

Love is what we sacrifice... that's tue..A beautiful poem... Fascinating! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Fantastic imagery and so marvelously written.5 Stars full for this Beauty, dear Colonel

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

It is grace in shimmering rain It is what makes us go high It is a point to touch of sky yes love is everything in life.. dear poet...... wish u all the wonders and love and grace in this new year. thank you.. tony

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Elena Sandu 05 March 2017

Beautiful imagery and truthful poem, thank you for share.

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