Blank Slates Poem by David Whalen

Blank Slates

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Social creatures, blank slates
The sum total of each and everyone
We've been exposed to has left some trace
No matter great, fleeting or miniscule

The slate gets erased but remnants remain
To shape e'er so slightly
The impressionable brain
And season it e'er so lightly

Each kindness done
Each gentle touch
Leaves it's mark
Be it little…or much

We should think twice before judging
The ones we think flawed
They're the sum of the writing
That appears on the wall

They're the product of happenstance
Victims of Fate
Tomes written by others
‘Pon minds open state

And they are who they are
Not by choice
but by words written at random
…Upon blank, empty slate…



6 stanzas-24 lines

Sunday, March 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lora Colon 24 March 2019

I don't think the slate is completely blank when we are born. We do inherit traits and talents from our ancestors. And throughout our life, everyone we meet has some influence as to what else is added to the slate. Even events and circumstances can alter the slate. All this, combined with our choices and decisions, makes us who we are. And I agree completely - we should not judge anyone else. We should spend more time making sure our slate is in proper order. A well-written piece.

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David Whalen

David Whalen

Covington Kentucky
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