Black Acid Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Black Acid

Rating: 5.0


burns through my flesh
burns through my soul
this black acid
will infest my insides
consume
devour
cant wash it off
cant neutralize it
its a cancer
incurable
unstoppable
no way to destroy it
it gets closer
burns deeper
invading and corrupting my very soul
its only a matter of time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madly In Love 05 April 2007

Wow good write Rocco

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Anita Blake 05 April 2007

all i can say is WOW i love it

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i stand in awe...i LOVED it!

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Ronn Michael Salinas 12 January 2010

It's like you've been bitten by a snake. good poem, man.

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Ahh, funny you spoke of me. But maybe not, you are probably in more suffering than I.

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Helena Alvarez 17 April 2008

This poem is so deep Its sad and beautiful at the same time You have talent

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hate to be covered in that lol, but i loved that poem sooooo much! ! your talented

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 September 2007

I love this poem, it's so strong and emotional. Great work.

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