Bee Sense Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Bee Sense

Rating: 5.0


It seems as if those bees bear no common sense
Of late they have built a hive in a cornice of my house
I know not what prompts them to come here
May be a few pots close by with roses blooming there
May be a few pigeons cooing and clapping their wings together there
May be anything and nothing but a strange silence reigning there
And I tried to reach them with a bee sense
And befriend to find them like flowers in a vase
But they smell many things
Hovering over near the access
Smelt me as if i was trying to enter the colony
To steal away their queen lodged in that home stately
Thus ended up being rose-stung in many a place
And left with marks of pheromone on my sleeves
Back home with a lesson bitter- sweet
But they are wonderful little souls excelling us in many a respect
Like in smell, touch, taste
And sight

Sunday, November 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: curiosity,fear,humour,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 November 2018

Many many thanks.......Rose Marie........I am so much obliged

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 November 2018

What a lovely poem. In a few seconds I was able to take a glimpse of these bees.roaming around a house with blooming roses. Beautifully crafted write with superb imagery.10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2018

And left with marks of pheromone on my sleeves Back home with a lesson bitter- sweet But they are wonderful souls excelling us in many a respect Like in smell, touch, taste.....touching and impressive expression. A beautiful poem having fear and humor has been nicely executed.10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 November 2018

I always love reading your reviews as they are inspiring and do touch my heart......Kumarmaniji...... May God bless you always to excel all other poets of your day....thank you very much

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