Beclouded Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Beclouded

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Beclouded
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Trees in groves
And thoughts in grooves
Seem inclined to think superlative
Being all heart to souls thirsting
And I felt the sky on me falling
And the clouds in the swimming
Mystifying things before me

A passing flake of subtlety
Across delicacies of thoughts
Prevailed and sustained the day
Came not unusual but as if ordained
And the narrowness prevailed

I debated but failed
To discriminate between
Right and wrong being clouded
Oh! where are those animated thoughts?
That I could sing a sense
Only contradictory
Lies so close to the surface……..




Monday, July 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A rich reflective revelation!

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Valsa George 29 July 2014

This is a great write with thoughts finding deeper levels! Enjoyed! Top marks!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 July 2014

wonderful write, deep and reflective.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 July 2014

Discriminate not My dear, between Right and wrong. Here find everything Is beyond our perception. Good one, wish you All good.

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A creative and compelling creation of high order my friend.

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