Ay! Paludip (I Follow Deep) Poem by Manonton Dalan

Ay! Paludip (I Follow Deep)



unseen touch
softer than a kiss
left me in whirpool
full of desire to feel
again

i waited
empty but throbbing
to mysterious feelings
emebering to tempo
of longing

i follow deep
tracing back stolen glances
from spring budding morn
with open lips comes

girl, you’re awesome
and i love you

ay! paludip = i follow deep
= stolen glances

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 10 January 2009

sweet lines with very romantic words and amusing at the end....nice ay! paludip....

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Analou Pabalate 30 September 2008

nice poem! ok..... follow deep.........hmmmmmmmmmm.

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Margualette van der Merwe 21 September 2008

very nice, love your 'pups'!

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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