Awake In My Sleep(Sad) Poem by Poet of the River

Awake In My Sleep(Sad)

Rating: 4.8


In my bed I toss and turn.
My breathing is raged and coming fast.
In my chest a constant steady burn.
My mind is trapped in the past.
The pain is a lesson for me to learn.
But how much longer dose it have to last?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 01 March 2012

LOVE the last two lines, a poetic epitaph

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Scotty Dogg 28 December 2011

Stormy, you keep coming up with good ones! I like it!

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California, but move around a lot.
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