At The Crack Of Dawn.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

At The Crack Of Dawn....

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At The Crack Of Dawn….

at the crack of dawn
I saw five birds on my lively lawn
chirping, talking and collecting
I wonder where is the rest?
perhaps fiery flying to their cozy nests?

these five beauteous birds daily in this space
I don't know what attracks them to this pleasant place?
I approach them carefully closer,
wouldn't they fly, afraid of total exposure?

full of patience, fed with a
rational mind,
I get closest to the birds, so enchanting,
in the nick of time, one bird starts talking chatterly!
no chirping or chattering,
but crystal clear conversing!

Oddly enough I won't be shocked
when this one'llstart
singing like a bard,
but this one bird
chatters like a human kind? !

this happened at the crack of dawn
on my lively emerald lawn
then in the same spot
I asked why so odd, dear God?

then the second prettiest bird,
he whispered
in my ear:
have no fear my dear,
if you believe in God,
not one thing is odd,

all things are possible,
this is the truth and infallible....

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Sunday 19 July 2020
A Dutch Beauteous Morn

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
AT THE CRACK OF DAWN....

Please have a read,

thank you so muchfor your responses


then the second prettiest bird,
he whispered
in my ear:
have no fear my dear,
if you believe in God,
not one thing is odd,

all things are possible,
this is the truth and infallible....


© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Sunday 19 July 2020
A Dutch Beauteous Morn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 July 2020

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 July 2020

A very lovely and captivating poem. Beautiful words that made me at close range with the wonderful birds with full images. So refreshing to read. Brilliantly Crafted and conveyed. To my Poem List.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2020

You have naturally and beautifully noticed the five chirping birds and found them in conversation. Wonderful sequence you have drawn in this excellent poem. Crystal clear chirping has given us definite motivational message of God. Cracking of dawn has brought up light of dignity to realize and live with trust for God. Nothing is odd, it s true that we believe in God. A great poem is excellently penned...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

Thank you so much for the great honour you bestow on me, dear poet Yeps Poet. I am constantly utmost happy when I read a great response like yours, Yeps Poet Sir. God's Blessings in Abundance for you, Sir. Thank you for your precious visit to my poem site.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

3) Only being able to submit poems is no fun, but giving comments, compliments and my applause for other poets on PH makes me feel alive and much much better. That's why I was not really active in the years 2011,2012,2013,2014,2015, and 2016. In 2011 in the month December I only submitted poems, but after the closing of PF in December 2016 I immediately jumped over to PH and asked for advices to you and also to Mrs. Juan Austin.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

2) WOW! What a greatest difference with the years 2011,2012,2013,2014,2015,2016. At last in 2017 I started to give comments to poems on PH. I was truly relieved. that I can communicate with other poets since 2017. Thank you so very much, dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir.Your eldest son Dr. Pintu Mahakul has helped me also a very lot.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

Dear Respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, I don't know where to start to thank you for so much advice to be on the right and correct way on this poet's jungle. Thanks to you I can walk in this poetic jungle like I wish to and this jungle has become a precious dome for me to keep walking every day and enjoy the surrounds. I know now very very much about the " secrets" of PH rules and habits.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

Dear Mrs. Juan Austin, thank you so much for your constant great support. You can never imagine how happiest I am. Only God knows that and now I let you know. Crystal clear caring compliments created with greatest love and attention. I thank you from my deepest insides and your responses do inspire me to write more. Thank you for your precious words, dearest friend.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2020

Thank you so much for your precious support, dear Rini I appreciate that most. God's Blessings in Abundance.

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