At Night Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

At Night

Rating: 3.8


Oftentimes we think there are no problems anymore, when we rest asleep, but all of a sudden things can make us feel upside down, despite the silence of the peaceful night...

At Night
Night falls at night peace
everyone is on an ear
in silence we pray, my love, do not fear
i feel most at my ease

night falls at night pleasure
mostly we rest and think of our treasure
we also know that this part of the night
an intruder can come and we are in a sudden fight

oftentimes we are deaf we do as sleepers
in our own area mostly as dreamers
what treasure, we do not posess
what dreams, mine have become less

night falls at night peace
everyone is asleep
in silence i pray, my love, please
a stranger in our house, whisper in my ear, don't weep

© copyright Wed Sep 7 20.10 hrs- 2011 -
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At Night
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: dark
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 17 December 2017

The night reveals more than the day.Beautiful poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2018

Thank you so much for your feedback.and compliment/comment. GBU in Abundance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2017

Night brings peace and hope in silence in between love and fear. Part of night gives us feelings of dream and treasure of emotion with night falls. A brilliant poem is presented is interesting poem about perception of night. Thank you for sharing this poem with us....10

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Nishu Mathur 19 April 2017

This is beautiful Sylvia. Soulful and soothing. Night means so many different things to people. You capture it all wonderfullyxx

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 17 February 2017

We feel upside down. Despite of peaceful night illusion does her magic. At night, night falls carrying peace for us during sleep or rest time but illusion arrives with many dreams. Love makes us fearless and we do not become worry. Every one of us pray and every one hears music of peaceful night. Ear remains alert. We are sleepers and dreamers. Stranger whispers in ear not to weep. We continue our prayers. Whole peaceful night does magic in life. Description of night is well crafted with peaceful imagery. I still hear the interesting whisper hidden in this outstanding poem. This is very well crafted....10/10

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