Are We Really Advanced To Feel Proud? Poem by Ramesh T A

Are We Really Advanced To Feel Proud?

Rating: 5.0


Astronauts travel in rockets to other planets;
We feel very proud that man is travelling
Even to Moon and other planets and Stars!
Technological pride makes us elated much!

But the old relics and inscriptions on them
Show ancient astronauts as our own ones!
This means we are advanced to their level
Now only after thousands of years, know!

Our pride immediately goes to pieces and
We feel we have missed much to reach them!
Now, what kind of beings are living in other
Planets in other Stars in the out Space? Wow!

Our pride of achievement is nothing before
The living beings of other planets in Space!
They are not meeting us so long due to our
Own lack of advancement to their levels...!

Tuesday, August 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pride
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 25 August 2015

I think you may be right, Ramesh. Do we humans talk to roaches? No. Because we are far more advanced. Why should any advanced beings want to talk to or interact with such violent, unevolved creatures such as we.

1 0 Reply
Ramesh T A 25 August 2015

I surely agree with what you say as your comment on my poem, dear Kelly Kurt! Thank you!

0 0
Ammu Sachariah 25 August 2015

Good poem. The living beings of other planet do not meet us as we haven't reached to their level. I liked it.

1 0 Reply
Ramesh T A 25 August 2015

Thank you very much for your affirmative comment on my poem, my fiend!

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
Close
Error Success