Aqua Power Poem by Vijay Sai R
Aqua Power
Just a stroll
By the side
On the sea shore
Steady waves
Making synchronous sound
Moving in rhythmic pattern
In an enchanting evening
When the sun
Is beginning to hide
Slowly but steadily
Making clouds of blue
To turn from
Dull orange
To golden silhouette
Enchanting beauty
A treat to watch
Such a natural happening
Just moments
Into pale darkness
Still visible visionary
When suddenly
The scenario
Begin to change
Spreading waves of panic
Water level
Increasing slowly
All around the vicinity
Gaining momentum gradually
Typical shouting
Of gathering water
Bubbling all over
Filling the entire arena
Dust and dirt
Evacuating everywhere
Pouncing forward
In ferocious speed
Picking up velocity
Swallowing whatever
It sees on its way
Mission accomplished
A little while later-
Pin drop silence
A mass of total damage
Remnants of
Left-over debris
Stench of rotten pulp
Aerial view
A perfect scene
Of indigestible apathy
Years to go to
To return to normal
Wonderfully worded and excellently express is this creative and compelling composition that moves from calm to storm in a seamless impeccable manner. Well done my friend!
A lovely poem about the changing face of nature- - At one moment it is perfect calm, at other moment it a force of destruction - - -
THREE: Thank you for the invitation to come here and read your finest poem.
TWO: to go to return to normal again. then there is still the big question: Can it? Leaders of the country must be joint working in a diligent way. A fascinating poem, finest descriptions about the heavy pollutions at own spot. A 10 for the Vote.
ONE: Surroundings oft make influence upon a creation of the poet, and so this is. Long gone beauty makes place for indigestible apathy. Poets oft conjure magic and this is the reverse. As a geographical admirer, some most precious and loved places are known to me, but you are absolutely right, the damaged done needs years t
this line i do not understand (though i like alliterations!) : Still visible visionary....but i like the poem very much and shall send to MyPoemList. favorite lines: A perfect scene Of indigestible apathy well done. it is read with the swiftness of the approaching water! thanks for sharing! bri ;)
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5/2/2024 12:42:28 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A clever poem. Very impressive.