Another Bloody Day. Poem by Fay Slimm

Reality had spoken..this poem..had revealed... Marvelous poem..powerful words! I'm in the line..A 10 from me!

Your words put it so clearly, we all pray to live in a peaceful world Fay, thank you for writing this, 10 Lynda xx

Well said my lady, this has got to stop its about time the world of humankind woke up, act now before its your daughter, your son that falls victim, it makes my blood boil that we just cant learn, the gun the most crass piece of machinery ever invented by man, tis sad that only the human mind could create such a tool.10 ++++++++++++ Chris Riled

Great piece Fay, An army without discipline becomes a murdering rabble.10\10 Regards Tom

PART OF THE REALLY SHOCKING THING TO ME WAS ALL THESE YOUN MEN GIVING THEIR LIVES FOR AN OLD MANS CAUSE AND THE DEVESTATION FOR NO APPARENT GAIN MYBE ITS JUST MY WESTERN MIND BUT IT SEEMS SUCH A FUTILE WAITE OF HUMAN LIFE? WHY? a REALLY PERYINENT POEM JIM

Fay..As long as men continue the persuit and maintenance of power over people and resources, we will advance no further.Bigotry, intollerance and blind following of inane doctrine should be exposed as the imposters they really are, Respectfully, Sid.

A very powerful and important poem

Dear Fay A marvellously evocative piece reflecting the outrage of us all regarding the latest infamies - this time in India. I hope there will be peace on earth somewhere this christmas. I feel and share your anger and frustration over this latest spate of needless violence in these superbly wriiten verses.

Senseless, Horrific, Bestial...yet more shockingly...something most of the world (I.M.O.) was notshockingly surprised upon hearing the news that terror had once again struck innocence dead, on God's planet. New York, Washington, China, Russia, Spain, India...there are no boundaries, there is no fear, especially of retribution, as these cowardly acts, are (sadly) being carried out by those who have no respect for their own lives....and even more twistingly, in many of these terroristic attacks, the players actually believe that their martydom wil be rewarded with eternal nirvana, or whatever their so-called heaven be called. Excellent work, on a very abhorrent event, Fay. Sorrowfully brilliant penning! FjR

A good write Fay on something which hurts to write. Where has their humanity gone, blocked by a miasma of evil thoughts. Bob