Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 453 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

An Unseen Love - Poem by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

After three years that she said I have to wait
Three years those past for me like three centuries to see my mate

After years of pain and desire,
After years of sadness and floods of fire

After I just look at myself I got that without you I'm nothing,
You are my Princess, you are my golden ring, and you are my heart's biggest king!

These times those past without you for me,
Were harder and so painful like the thousands of stings that I received from bees

I'm calling you with my whole existence and powerful, I have no lies
I like to just see you for another time, to just take a short look at those faithful eyes!

You are my spirit daisy; you are a unique crown,
You are the queen of the angel's town

My existence is nothing in front of your look
I will be melt, just if you took…

Your feelings are pinky and lovely, you are not a human
Also you are from sky, such an archangel, you are for no man

A saint and pure creature
That is a unique gift from nature

Poet's Notes about The Poem

i offer this poem to you. yes, ~N~...

Comments about An Unseen Love by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

  • Rookie - 216 Points Negar Libre (7/26/2015 10:21:00 AM)

    OMG, so deep, sweet and painful. u have a golden heart honey. but by the way, who's ~N~? (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (9/22/2013 4:54:00 PM)

    a good write. great imagination. very touching (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (9/4/2012 5:41:00 PM)

    Young Ellias a most heartfelt and sincere poem. I salute you sailor man. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,008 Points * Sunprincess * (8/24/2012 4:43:00 AM)

    So sad and I feel for you I also wish you could take another look and spend the day... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (8/20/2012 1:37:00 AM)

    nice witten.good rhyme, so meaningful.full of regret and frailty and the feeling of loving another creature.nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (8/18/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    A lovely poem with a great mystery right to the end, well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Hamid Negah (8/15/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    Ellias, your poem has special rhyme, in reading time i enjoy so much. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 14, 2012

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