An Unseen Love Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

An Unseen Love

Rating: 5.0


After three years that she said I have to wait
Three years those past for me like three centuries to see my mate

After years of pain and desire,
After years of sadness and floods of fire

After I just look at myself I got that without you I'm nothing,
You are my Princess, you are my golden ring, and you are my heart's biggest king!

These times those past without you for me,
Were harder and so painful like the thousands of stings that I received from bees

I'm calling you with my whole existence and powerful, I have no lies
I like to just see you for another time, to just take a short look at those faithful eyes!

You are my spirit daisy; you are a unique crown,
You are the queen of the angel's town

My existence is nothing in front of your look
I will be melt, just if you took…

Your feelings are pinky and lovely, you are not a human
Also you are from sky, such an archangel, you are for no man

A saint and pure creature
That is a unique gift from nature

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i offer this poem to you. yes, ~N~...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hamid Negah 15 August 2012

Ellias, your poem has special rhyme, in reading time i enjoy so much.

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Negar Gorji 26 July 2015

OMG, so deep, sweet and painful. u have a golden heart honey. but by the way, who's ~N~?

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Heather Wilkins 22 September 2013

a good write. great imagination. very touching

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Captain Cur 04 September 2012

Young Ellias a most heartfelt and sincere poem. I salute you sailor man.

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Nader Baheri 20 August 2012

nice witten.good rhyme, so meaningful.full of regret and frailty and the feeling of loving another creature.nice work.

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Heather Wilson 18 August 2012

A lovely poem with a great mystery right to the end, well done.

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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